Week 4 Comments #2: Vandy Vela

I Before E Except After C / I Before WE Except After SEE

"I
A child is born into this world as an IndIvIdual and truly, the first years of life are all about the “I.” The chIld begins to develop: coohIng, rollIng , crawlIng, babblIng, eatIng, walkIng, talkIng, 
Self development is IntrInsIc. 
No one has to teach a chIld …. 
I am …hungry, thIrsty, tIred, sleepy, happy, 
I want…numma, juIce, apple, trIcycle, 
I need…

SEE
What has been happening all along is that the I has been met by a WE and yet only in time does the “I” SEE that WE has contributed to meet the wants and needs.

WE
After time the I sees that the WE was indeed before the I
WE were there waiting til you were born….”You were such a cute baby”
WE fed you your first bottle there in the hospital
WE planned your birthday party

I Before WE Except After SEE because once I do SEE that WE was there before
ME."

Still in Revision


Comment:

Yesi's Whirled~ said...

What an excellent way to summarize our chapters Vandy! It kind of reminded me of the Id, the Ego, and the Superego. It is so interesting that we must go through life's experiences before we fully understand and truly appreciate concepts such as this. I certainly hope you share your writing when you are done with it. Great Job! ;)